Drowning

and did you
really think
your kiss
meant anything?

do you think
i felt anything?

i felt total
sensations
washing over me,
like waves
pulling me under.

please,
kiss me again,
drown me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Beautifully romantic!
Skinner Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 12:52 PM
thank you for your comment Kim
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