Drowning
Gasping for air
Down under the water
I come back up
Take a deep breath
Down under the water
Everything as murky blue
Take a deep breath
The water is bitter
Everything as murky blue
My vision is fading
The water is bitter
My eyes are closed
My vision is fading
The water caresses me
My eyes are closed
As my life leaves me
The water caresses me
Floating weightlessly
As my life leaves me
And I am free
Copyright © Caroline Lohrey | Year Posted 2009
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