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Drowning

the moment we met I was smitten and soon I was drowning in lust and in passion I was bitten and lost for his silky voice and words filled me with trust and I did not realize I was becoming a slave yes, a slave to his caressing hands and his whispers and lips ... his scent became my drink of wine but it was a prison with invisible bars where sweet love became pain and hate and I was drowning, drowning, drowning losing myself ... for his words smothered mine and yet I purred like a kitten and still my love for him dripped keeping me hostage leaving my soul filled with loathing and disgust but it was wrong, wrong, so wrong and I knew it ... then, somehow I gathered up all my courage and ran away from this soul stealing lover and never looked back for his kind of love was drowning me ... ___________________ May 13, 2021 Poetry/Verse/drowning Copyright Protected, ID 1354-421-13 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (May 14) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/15/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/15/2021 2:07:00 AM
Back with congratulations and a fave!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2021 7:49:00 AM
JCB, thank you so much for the congratulations and the FAV, love _Constance
Date: 5/14/2021 5:11:00 AM
Such a brave heart you have! Running away is the hardest thing one can do when drowned in the spell of a wrong love. This is such a moving poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2021 8:35:00 AM
JCB, thank you for the visit and comment, and compliment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/13/2021 1:12:00 PM
WOW! Beautifully-written, Constance. It took a great deal of courage, confidence, and discipline to walk away from a situation like that. Great writing!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2021 1:37:00 PM
Milt, thanks for the compliment, sometimes women and even men find themselves in bad relationships and it takes courage to untangle ourselves, peace _Constance
Date: 5/13/2021 12:41:00 PM
- A beautiful and deeply moving poem, Constance ... ("and yet I purred like a kitten") ... :))) ... "the cat lover" often appears as hidden elements .... :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2021 1:38:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the compliment, yes, I like that line too, lol, love _Constance

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