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Drowning

Dark winds whisper incoherent lies Swirling through imagination’s portal Wherein black hawks screech and The lone hound howls Beseeching, warning Impending abyss Where deep dank despair awaits Lowering its curtain of oppression Like a finely spun web Black widow licks her lips hungrily Seeds sown here give way to broken distorted thoughts Innocence twisted to darkness Reason breaks through Sheds the light of hope Relief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/15/2018 9:42:00 AM
Well done, Madeleine. Congrats on your win.
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 6/15/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Line!
Date: 6/14/2018 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win with this deep, powerful piece! Best regards. Pandita
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 6/14/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Pandita! I appreciate the feedback.

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