Dinda Minardi Poet Free verse

Drown To Rise Feat Michael J Falotico

These are thundering noises that I hear
They are thumping in my ears, pump restlessness to my head
I feel like I'm going to explode
Breathe no more.. I gasp my last air 

They're getting louder
I run so fast till I can't feel my feet
I run so fast till I care no more but sounds of my steps
I’m still not breathing

So this is how I die
Drowned by my fear and worries

 
With my chin just over the point where I could breathe..

I French kiss the air to show my fight and belief…

I won’t leave this cruel world like this, not this way..

My life needs to be read and my dreams another day…

My crawl becomes a walk and my stride now a run..

Because this heart is strong and my soul is not done…



Collaboration feat Michael J. Falotico

Special thanks to Michael J. Falotico that has completed this poem in a perfect way :)

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Richard Lamoureux March 11, 2013 at 6:28 PM Very good collaberation.

Sukmawati Komala March 1, 2013 at 5:34 PM what a lovely poem ...congratulation for both of you this is so amazing,,, :) enjoyed so much <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

Michael J. Falotico February 28, 2013 at 9:01 PM It was such a wonderful pleasure to write and create with you Dinda. Your a talent and a sweet friend. xoxo Michael

Poet Destroyer A February 27, 2013 at 1:07 PM A very lovey and wonderful poem, Michael did a wonderful job on the remainder of your poem. a good posting..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2013 at 4:42 AM - You + Michael ..... (a good mix) it must be a wonderful poem. - BRAVO!!!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams February 27, 2013 at 1:40 AM Dinda and Michael an excellent collab, love both parts...David