Drought

willows yet linger weeping over scorched, cracked earth once underwater Word Count: 10 9/13/2009

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2015 7:57:00 AM

Excellent imagery you create with these few lines, Tim! I always find weeping willows a trusty source for inspiration. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:34:00 PM

hey tim congrats AGAIN!! going to KY to see Joe's mom, who may be dying. Maybe will be online next week , but if you don't see me, that's why.

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/26/2015 2:35:00 AM

Will be praying for Joe's mom my friend. What city in Kentucky? My grandmother moved from Greenville, MS to Owensboro to live with my uncle when she could no longer take care of herself. I have been there quite a few times...By the way, I owe this placement to you because you helped me shorten and compact it...Remember?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:53:00 AM

I enjoyed, Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 4:48:00 AM

Tim congrats on placing hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:27:00 AM

Tim... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 3:19:00 PM

This sounds like texas before all the rain

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 3:19:00 PM

I hope you don't mind me reading all of these again. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2014 9:58:00 PM

SOUP MAIL

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2014 9:58:00 PM

TIM, CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 6:42:00 AM

Great expressive and descriptive work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Gail Debole

Date: 11/20/2012 4:00:00 PM

Hi Tim - Congratulations on your win! - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:52:00 PM

I'm glad to finally be able to see this one of yours, Tim. Congratulations on making it on the winners list. Hope you got the books and letter ok. And hope you will have an awesome thanksgiving.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:43:00 PM

Tim:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:14:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 1:58:00 AM

CONGRATS TIM ON A SUPER WRITE SO VIBRANT WITH IMAGERY AND A BIG WIN TOO LUV .. READY FOR FOOTBALL ON TURKEY DAY? WISHING U ALL A GREAT THANKSGIVING LUV.

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/14/2009 10:16:00 AM

I know that parts of texas is going through a severe drought . I'm hoping this rain we are getting will help them.....nice haiku~!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/13/2009 11:39:00 PM

Excellent execution Tim, nice 5/7/5 flow, and great last line...it packs a punch...Raul