Drops of May Weather Storms

I know your pain 
Although I don't know what's happening, 
I can still feel the vain. 
Seems like the beginning is the ending 

One moment there's bliss 
It feels much like a wet kiss. 
But out of nowhere you see a mirror, 
"It felt so real," as you stand there alone. 

You try to make sense of it all; 
Yet everything begins to fall. 
"AHHHH!" you scream to the top of your lungs. 
Your blue eyes are running waterfalls. 

It hurts me to see a single tear, 
You're not the only one to hide in the room. 
Swallow your tears, don't let it drop, 
A splash will only cause more bitter props. 

But like I say, 
Tomorrow will always bring another day. 
So Faith, throw away your thorns, 
anticipating a happy God-given next day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 9/29/2009 11:53:00 AM
Phillip, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:07:00 PM
Just dropping by to add to my other two comments--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2009 4:46:00 PM
Much to think about. Very Intriguing indeed.. Congratulations on this lovely piece being featured this week. God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 3/4/2009 7:42:00 AM
Phillip - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Phillip on your elegy being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:46:00 PM
Our weather here in Oregon is having a hard time making up its mind what its going to do too ... LOL ... wonderful write here, Philip and a well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the soup this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured once more! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:31:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having it featured for a second time. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/9/2008 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Wonderful ,Laura :)
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Date: 10/6/2008 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations Phillip on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/5/2008 8:57:00 PM
Phillip - Very deeply emotional poem that ended in a most uplifting way - Congrats on the feature and God Bless
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Date: 10/5/2008 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations Phillip on this message of Hope being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:36:00 PM
Yes...we all have to hope for better times, when things are painful. Nicely done !~Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2008 2:56:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Yes, in God, there is always hope of a better tomorrow. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/3/2008 10:08:00 PM
Phillip - Boy isn't life just like that - Full of confusion and pain - Loved how you ended it on a high note - Great job and God Bless
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