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Dropping Tears

Crying is like- drop, drop, puddle, ripples, ripple...it's just that simple A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul 2/18/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2023 5:33:00 PM

I can hear it…yes! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 4:02:00 PM

creative thinking, charles. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/20/2023 7:25:00 AM

Love this Charlie. Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2023 5:26:00 AM

- Why not... simple as that, Charlie - Great written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/18/2023 6:11:00 AM

What a lovely short poem. Great Monoku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2023 4:22:00 AM

Good one for the contest and it reads like a good contender to me ...Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/18/2023 2:47:00 AM

Simple is often the best Charlie. Love your Monoku.

Charles Messina
Date: 2/18/2023 3:53:00 AM

Thank you, Wendy. Simply said :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/17/2023 10:04:00 PM

My dear friend, Charlie, I hope they're not your tears.. Your expressive monoku captures tearful moments with potent imagery. Simply splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 2/18/2023 3:58:00 AM

Susan, so great to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful comments and the win and warm wishes my dear friend. My eyes have dripped many a time, fortunately they have been dried for a short while, thank the Lord :) Hoping all is well. ~Charlie