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Dropping Tears

Crying is like- drop, drop, puddle, ripples, ripple...it's just that simple 


A Ripple To Me 2 Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: JCB Brul 
2/18/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2023 at 5:33 PM

I can hear it…yes! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2023 at 4:02 PM

creative thinking, charles. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

February 20, 2023 at 7:25 AM

Love this Charlie. Congratulations on your win! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 19, 2023 at 5:26 AM

- Why not... simple as that, Charlie - Great written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

February 18, 2023 at 6:11 AM

What a lovely short poem. Great Monoku.

Sara Kendrick

February 18, 2023 at 4:22 AM

Good one for the contest and it reads like a good contender to me ...Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Speaks Volumes

February 18, 2023 at 2:47 AM

Simple is often the best Charlie. Love your Monoku.

Charles Messina

February 18, 2023 at 3:53 AM

Thank you, Wendy. Simply said :)

Susan Ashley

February 17, 2023 at 10:04 PM

My dear friend, Charlie, I hope they're not your tears.. Your expressive monoku captures tearful moments with potent imagery. Simply splendid! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Charles Messina

February 18, 2023 at 3:58 AM

Susan, so great to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful comments and the win and warm wishes my dear friend. My eyes have dripped many a time, fortunately they have been dried for a short while, thank the Lord :) Hoping all is well. ~Charlie

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