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Dropped In the S:::

i’ve been s-coffing quite a lot lately ~ i think perhaps i’ve got a s-cold said menippean to the rhymester ~ s-pitting out helios as he s-trolled ————————————— a fair straightforward non rotating ~ syllable counted monoku #. #. # even the maggots are important ~ grow wings and persevere with life By David Kavanagh

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/16/2023 6:22:00 AM

That a lot of s::: David, in a monoku, But love the straight forwardness here, and truth. All in all clever poetry indeed. Harry

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/16/2023 10:07:00 AM

He honestly never stops Harry, like a broken record player, scoff after scoff after s:::, one who would deny us our very existence if he could, thanks so much for the visit, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2023 1:26:00 PM

well it's more than one line but sure entertaining. I enjoyed the puns I saw. Is this for the pun contest?

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/14/2023 1:34:00 PM

Oh damn I forgot about the pun contest going on, but no this one is for the menippean fly in the soup, ah no he’s a great guy really, bit of a joker doesn’t take human existence serious at all, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2023 7:40:00 AM

Not so crazy about what maggots turn into. Let them all pass on. I know we need them to clean up the carrion. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/14/2023 8:15:00 AM

We sure do Sara also they can clean infected wounds, but alas when humanity is taunted by the menippean, I choose to stand my ground, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/13/2023 3:26:00 AM

Great poem even when dropping the s.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/13/2023 4:45:00 AM

Thanks Victor, he is indeed a peculiar case, constantly s-coffing about his poisoned views on humanity, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/13/2023 1:55:00 AM

He's like the annoying kid who sits behind you on the plane when you're trying to sleep lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/13/2023 4:39:00 AM

Ha yeah but much worse Tom, I mean who would he be like at all, going around telling every human on earth, it would be better if they were never born, he has serious nihilistic issues indeed, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/12/2023 2:50:00 PM

Dead and Buried Me thinks Sir

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:15:00 PM

Heya Christopher, hope you’re keeping well, Ah this is just an ongoing battle against one who wants to kill off the whole human race, in fact he blames us on the whole universes problems, when in fact we’re the only ones who actually try give reality meaning, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/12/2023 2:15:00 PM

I s-coffed at one s-aid mineppean with a s-colding of my own when he s-pit venom, s-mugly s-corning the right for women to bare children. S-hameful. S-uch fine s-laps you deliver.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/12/2023 3:06:00 PM

Ha you certainly did Jenna, the S guy just never stops putting down women, children, men, the unborn, the dead, a total mocking nihilistic misanthrope, oh yeah and this rhymster too, what a cheek lol, cheers David