Droplets

Droplets falling down
running, splashing as they fall
in diamond prism

written 09/02/2013
contest Perfect Haiku 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/26/2015 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/28/2015 6:50:00 AM
ty Joseph hugs
Date: 6/26/2015 10:21:00 AM
Oh, this one's just pretty perfect! Loved it Shadow. Congrats!
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Date: 6/28/2015 6:49:00 AM
ty Kim hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 9:24:00 PM
wow, how did I miss this one. I really like the imagery. Congrats, dearie. If I don't get on here next week, I will be back soon to see more of your poetry.
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:12:00 AM
It is in my new book Andrea you go and have a great time and do not worry about soup it will still be here lol hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 7:07:00 PM
Love the imagery of a diamond prism in this lovely winning entry Shadow! Congratulations on your high placement with this beauty!
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:04:00 AM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 5:10:00 PM
Lovely imagery and fascinating diamond prism! Congratulations on a most lovely win. // paul
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Date: 6/25/2015 5:44:00 PM
ty Paul hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 11:42:00 AM
lovely haiku, very effective metaphor! Janice
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Date: 6/25/2015 5:44:00 PM
ty Janice hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 10:19:00 AM
Honed from the sun !!! Love this one so much, Shadow !! Congratulations !!
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:52:00 AM
ty Carrie hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 7:40:00 AM
Lovely, I see we were both in a mood for splashing. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:51:00 AM
ty Rick indeed we were hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 6:20:00 AM
Congrats, Shadow, on your high winning haiku. I enjoyed your poem. ~~Darlene
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:50:00 AM
ty Darlene hugs
Date: 6/25/2015 1:25:00 AM
Shadow... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**
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Date: 6/25/2015 2:46:00 AM
ty very much Skat hugs
Date: 9/3/2013 10:17:00 AM
Loved it Shadow, a few words said it all...Seren
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:51:00 PM
hi and Ty Seren I do love Haiku's. Very happy you enjoyed
Date: 9/2/2013 5:20:00 PM
This was awesome! I love how you laid this out! Absorb the raindrops.
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:24:00 PM
hi Drake rain the cleanser glad you like it ty for your time reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/2/2013 5:12:00 PM
Very nice imagery! Laura :)
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:25:00 PM
so kind of you Laura ty Shadow x smile
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