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Droplets

Droplets falling down
running, splashing as they fall
in diamond prism

written 09/02/2013
contest Perfect Haiku 2

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013

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June 26, 2015 at 10:07 PM

Congrats on a fine win Shadow

Shadow Hamilton

June 28, 2015 at 6:50 AM

ty Joseph hugs

June 26, 2015 at 10:21 AM

Oh, this one's just pretty perfect! Loved it Shadow. Congrats!

Shadow Hamilton

June 28, 2015 at 6:49 AM

ty Kim hugs

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:24 PM

wow, how did I miss this one. I really like the imagery. Congrats, dearie. If I don't get on here next week, I will be back soon to see more of your poetry.

Shadow Hamilton

June 26, 2015 at 2:12 AM

It is in my new book Andrea you go and have a great time and do not worry about soup it will still be here lol hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

June 25, 2015 at 7:07 PM

Love the imagery of a diamond prism in this lovely winning entry Shadow! Congratulations on your high placement with this beauty!

Shadow Hamilton

June 26, 2015 at 2:04 AM

ty Connie hugs

June 25, 2015 at 5:10 PM

Lovely imagery and fascinating diamond prism! Congratulations on a most lovely win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 5:44 PM

ty Paul hugs

June 25, 2015 at 11:42 AM

lovely haiku, very effective metaphor! Janice

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 5:44 PM

ty Janice hugs

Carrie Richards

June 25, 2015 at 10:19 AM

Honed from the sun !!! Love this one so much, Shadow !! Congratulations !!

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 10:52 AM

ty Carrie hugs

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:40 AM

Lovely, I see we were both in a mood for splashing. Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 10:51 AM

ty Rick indeed we were hugs

Darlene Gifford

June 25, 2015 at 6:20 AM

Congrats, Shadow, on your high winning haiku. I enjoyed your poem. ~~Darlene

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 10:50 AM

ty Darlene hugs

June 25, 2015 at 1:25 AM

Shadow... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 2:46 AM

ty very much Skat hugs

September 3, 2013 at 10:17 AM

Loved it Shadow, a few words said it all...Seren

Shadow Hamilton

September 4, 2013 at 4:51 PM

hi and Ty Seren I do love Haiku's. Very happy you enjoyed

September 2, 2013 at 5:20 PM

This was awesome! I love how you laid this out! Absorb the raindrops.

Shadow Hamilton

September 2, 2013 at 5:24 PM

hi Drake rain the cleanser glad you like it ty for your time reading Shadow x smile

September 2, 2013 at 5:12 PM

Very nice imagery! Laura :)

Shadow Hamilton

September 2, 2013 at 5:25 PM

so kind of you Laura ty Shadow x smile

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