Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

Droplets

The droplets of water
... cling...
Upon the branches of the tree
 crystalline objects
hanging delicately
Catching the morning rays
....Glistening....
  like diamonds
adorning the branches
evaporating
just like a desert mirage.

7/2/13

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Debbie Duncan August 18, 2013 at 3:11 AM Well this is very nice picture you wrote up there ;} <3

Anne-Lise Andresen July 12, 2013 at 4:30 PM - Phyllis, nice to read your beautiful poem tonight. - You sure made ??a beautiful picture. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo July 7, 2013 at 7:11 PM This is so nice. I can just picture them. They must look beautiful. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Sara Kendrick July 6, 2013 at 5:29 AM Those dewdrops or raindrops are like magic..Enjoyed reading your description of them..You captured the vision so well..Thanks for your visits..Sara

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2013 at 10:59 PM well, you are not so dried up yet. Just look at this gem that you produced. Sorry you are in the slumps, dear. I had hoped that this would finally be a good year, but it is the worst one of my life. for REAL. I hope you and I can get out of our slumps.

Jack Horne July 5, 2013 at 4:20 PM love this - just beautiful. So glad to hear you're over that nasty flu, Phyll. Hope you have a wonderful weekend x

Joseph May July 2, 2013 at 7:32 PM nicely penned ...enjoyed

April Gabriella July 2, 2013 at 6:49 PM I love this. Wonderful!