04/26/23
Free Submissions Eighth Place
Premier Contest by Sotto Poet
DROOPED LOTUS Days back lovey abloom lotus was at focus of fluttering butterfly and humming bees in rapture to capture fragrance and nectar. Now lotus drooped with shrunk wrinkled petals floats on marshy mossy low pond. Swarm of flies assemble on bosom of withered blossom. Willow standing on wet muddy brim mourns in silent scream weeping watching dry deceased flower abandoned by bees and butterflies.
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