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Drooling

All things considered, yesterday was pretty cool Not the temps but my refreshing dip in the pool As I splashed around I almost drowned As this vision appeared and I started to drool

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Date: 6/20/2016 9:46:00 PM
Good poem. I wonder if this vision was your wife. Thanks for sharing -JT
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/21/2016 7:24:00 AM
LOL... of course!!!
Date: 6/20/2016 10:31:00 AM
Running hot in the great SouthWest... So remember them in your dreams... 117 is really hot or so it would seem. Bet their pools are even hot at that temperature. When my Dad had cancer surgery I stayed with him awhile... even the cold water coming out of the tap was hot! So smile!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2016 1:54:00 PM
YIKES!!! Never in my whole long life have I ever experienced a temp of 117... must be hard to breathe! xxx

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