Drones

Two bees or not two bees, let say, a pair
of drones in love on their honeymoon
as long as daylight, tell me how you dare
to be so happy while the afternoon
already stretched the elongated shadows
of trees across the gravel dark and wet
from the midmorning rain, the endless meadows
and farther to the twilight which has yet
to step into the breech. Look how the heaven
is getting darker, how the honey herbs
close up to sleep. It’s twenty five to seven
but it is strange: if anything disturbs
you, it’s the hug that seemed to be some meager,
it is the kiss that wasn’t sweet enough.
The drones don’t fear the darkness, they are eager
for night so they could go in the buff.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canerdy Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 9:41 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Kurt! Janice!
Ravidas Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Thank you, Janice. My best wishes and congrates to winner)
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 5:36 PM
so cute. Drones going in the buff! loved the enjambment you used. Congrats on the win.
Ravidas Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Adrea. My enjambments are bowing to you)
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 4:00 PM
very entertaining, Kurt. Congrats on your win.
Ravidas Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Line. Glad to see you)
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April 17, 2019 at 1:16 AM
If you get crazy and decide to edit or change any of this poem, PLEASE keep in this line exactly as is: "if anything disturbs you, it’s the hug that seemed to be some meager, it is the kiss that wasn’t sweet enough." Thank you.
Ravidas Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 9:04 AM
I promise I won't. Thank you, Caren. You know how to motivate people)
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