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Drones

Two bees or not two bees, let say, a pair of drones in love on their honeymoon as long as daylight, tell me how you dare to be so happy while the afternoon already stretched the elongated shadows of trees across the gravel dark and wet from the midmorning rain, the endless meadows and farther to the twilight which has yet to step into the breech. Look how the heaven is getting darker, how the honey herbs close up to sleep. It’s twenty five to seven but it is strange: if anything disturbs you, it’s the hug that seemed to be some meager, it is the kiss that wasn’t sweet enough. The drones don’t fear the darkness, they are eager for night so they could go in the buff.

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Date: 5/19/2019 9:41:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Kurt! Janice!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/20/2019 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. My best wishes and congrates to winner)
Date: 5/19/2019 5:36:00 PM
so cute. Drones going in the buff! loved the enjambment you used. Congrats on the win.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/20/2019 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Adrea. My enjambments are bowing to you)
Date: 5/19/2019 4:00:00 PM
very entertaining, Kurt. Congrats on your win.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/20/2019 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Line. Glad to see you)
Date: 4/17/2019 1:16:00 AM
If you get crazy and decide to edit or change any of this poem, PLEASE keep in this line exactly as is: "if anything disturbs you, it’s the hug that seemed to be some meager, it is the kiss that wasn’t sweet enough." Thank you.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/17/2019 9:04:00 AM
I promise I won't. Thank you, Caren. You know how to motivate people)

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