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DRIZZLING RAIN

DRIZZLING RAIN*
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under drizzling
rain
gardener dreams
of blossoms~
faith
and
hope
*Note: *Note: This poem was published at Poetry Soup in June 2025 (poetrysoup.com › poem › drizzling_rain_1738151) then later deleted. This is my original poem.

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Anne Winter August 7, 2025 at 1:18 AM I love this poem as sweet as the rain :) sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:32 PM awww, thank you. You're so kind and sweet :-) enjoy your evening, Sara

Rowena Velasco August 6, 2025 at 11:46 PM A tender, hopeful sketch — the image of a gardener dreaming under soft rain feels like a prayer for growth. Beautifully captured. sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:33 PM wow, you 'got' the other point of the poem (prayer for growth)! I appreciate your depth, sensitivity, and insights, hugs, Sara

Eileen Manassian August 6, 2025 at 11:09 PM I liked this poem. It filled me with a sense of anticipation for better things to come. Nature has that effect. Thank you for sharing and for your comment on my blog. sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:32 PM thanks for your kind words, Eileen. Nature is many things, isn't it. have a wonderful evening, Sara

Line Gauthier August 6, 2025 at 4:12 PM sweet ~ sara Etgen-Baker August 6, 2025 at 5:12 PM many thanks!