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Drizzling Life Giving Substance

Lingering drizzle.
Liquid sunshine from the sky.
Giving all a drink.

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Doris Culverhouse

November 4, 2009 at 9:10 AM

typo before should be good one!!LOL

Doris Culverhouse

November 4, 2009 at 9:09 AM

hot poem!! youhoo!! goog one

Carolyn Devonshire

November 4, 2009 at 7:32 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, Marty. Very lovely image and an uplifting perspective. Enjoyed it! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

October 29, 2009 at 7:54 PM

you've got it too? nicely penned. The sun was beautiful today, it was great!!

James Marshall Goff

October 29, 2009 at 7:34 PM

very creative! Martin! and thanks for the comments!

Pamela Griffiths

October 29, 2009 at 6:35 PM

I liked this. Lovely words. Pam.

Moonbee Canady

October 29, 2009 at 5:05 PM

One of my favorite songs by Lenny Kravitz is "I Love The Rain" ... Sometimes, I put It On and Play It Loud, when there's a gusher ... Reminded Me of That... Good Write, Marty ... MoonBee

Gert W. Knop

October 29, 2009 at 4:55 PM

Yes, Martin, we all need a drink from nature! Well written Haiku! And thanks for your comments...Gert

Trudy Diane Rider

October 29, 2009 at 4:27 PM

I love the second line! Liquid sunshine! Wonderful feeling this! THank you also for your comments recently also, they are greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~