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Drizzling Life Giving Substance

Lingering drizzle. Liquid sunshine from the sky. Giving all a drink.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2009 9:10:00 AM

typo before should be good one!!LOL

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2009 9:09:00 AM

hot poem!! youhoo!! goog one

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2009 7:32:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, Marty. Very lovely image and an uplifting perspective. Enjoyed it! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2009 7:54:00 PM

you've got it too? nicely penned. The sun was beautiful today, it was great!!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/29/2009 7:34:00 PM

very creative! Martin! and thanks for the comments!

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/29/2009 6:35:00 PM

I liked this. Lovely words. Pam.

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/29/2009 5:05:00 PM

One of my favorite songs by Lenny Kravitz is "I Love The Rain" ... Sometimes, I put It On and Play It Loud, when there's a gusher ... Reminded Me of That... Good Write, Marty ... MoonBee

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/29/2009 4:55:00 PM

Yes, Martin, we all need a drink from nature! Well written Haiku! And thanks for your comments...Gert

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/29/2009 4:27:00 PM

I love the second line! Liquid sunshine! Wonderful feeling this! THank you also for your comments recently also, they are greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~

Date: 10/29/2009 2:58:00 PM

What a creative view. Good use of imagery. Well done! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/29/2009 10:22:00 AM

so true. john

Elaine George

Date: 10/29/2009 9:24:00 AM

A Haiku that implants vivid images in my mind. thank you for sharing, Martin, and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/29/2009 1:36:00 AM

Nice work Martin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments