Drizzling Diamonds

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A vast number of stars gleamed in the sky. 
Embrace us from the darkness whereby. 
Happily interwind, with the fragrance of roses.
My words express my emotion perfectly. 
Don't bother using a sextant or compass.
I lack wings; I am going to miss you at night.
I long for a fine swarm of zeal and thirst.
And then there's a delicate seduction.
In terms of vitality, you're completely insane.
Calm my heart and all the cold nights.
Did you cope with my queries and facts wisely?
To clear the ice around my heart.
I'd become confused in my dispersal. 
An eerie effect can arise at any age or night.
To retain the sun's perimeter yielded.


Written: April 8, 2021
My Obsession Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/9/2021 9:04:00 PM

Your poem is beautifully imagined, with incredible imagery, Lasaad. The pictures are wonderful, too. I can see you capturing a contest win, with this gem.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/10/2021 5:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind and sweet words; hearing from a famous poet is very reassuring. Have a blessed day Evelyn with my best wishes and warm hugs.// Las

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/9/2021 7:47:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, I thought I left a comment on this well-written write yesterday. Your contest and imagery is spot on. You express a love not being returned very well. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/9/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thank Alexis, I appreciate every single word you said; that really means a lot to me, and Best wishes to you too, Have a wonderful and blessed day