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Jan 4, 2025   1.35pm

drizzles and sun

drizzles and sun
play songs at the ocean
with an umbrella dance
you’ll soon find
that rainbow flaunts
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February 5, 2025 at 8:53 AM
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January 8, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Lovely- a nice image this makes
Gasun Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend, Paige. God bless you always and your writings/poetry. I'll visit you tomorrow ok
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