Drizzle Hiku


~s~t~o~r~m~ clouds m-e-l-t on trees
d     with twilight tinge
   r
           i
               z
                       z
                              l   e
 l e a v e s weave …l…a…c…e… of *p*e*a*r*l*
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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:52 PM
You're amazing, Subimal. These new shapes to poems are amazing to me. Write On! my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much, Bill for your wonderful comments. Are you in Austin?
Fleming Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Lovely words! Nicely contrived. :) john
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, John for your visit and nice comments
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