Driving Too Fast

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

sydney avey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Sydney, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Hi Sydney, Nice spacial elements and concise images illustrated in a straightforward manner here. Interesting blending of the philosophical and psychological reflective passage of time as well. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

Hi Sydney, Nice spacial elements and concise images illustrated in a straightforward manner here. Interesting blending of the philosophical and psychological reflective passage of time as well. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

I like this- sometimes I too get caught up in all the things going wrong-or that I think will go wrong-and I forget to take notice of what is right. Your poem reminds me to do so today. Thank you. :-)