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Driving Too Fast

Always ahead of myself looking at landscapes through smudges of worry clouding the rear view mirror of my mind.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 12:06:00 PM

sydney avey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Sydney Avey
Date: 3/15/2016 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Linda. I haven't written much poetry lately. I'm polishing a novel manuscript. Your encouraging words make me think perhaps I should check in on my poetry muse and see if she has anything for me! May the muse be with you! Sydney

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2015 2:22:00 PM

Sydney, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/10/2014 2:28:00 PM

Hi Sydney, Nice spacial elements and concise images illustrated in a straightforward manner here. Interesting blending of the philosophical and psychological reflective passage of time as well. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

Sydney Avey
Date: 9/10/2014 3:34:00 PM

Thanks for your thoughtful comments, Earl.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/10/2014 2:27:00 PM

Christine Costello

Date: 9/10/2014 12:41:00 PM

I like this- sometimes I too get caught up in all the things going wrong-or that I think will go wrong-and I forget to take notice of what is right. Your poem reminds me to do so today. Thank you. :-)

Sydney Avey
Date: 9/10/2014 3:35:00 PM

Thanks Christine. I have to remind myself of this every day!