Driving To Monterey

Clouds cap mountains
Making them like models
My eyes see toys
Green paint and fuzz
Card-stock and brush strokes
But its real
And it makes me think that nothing could ever really be bad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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February 18, 2019 at 6:46 AM
I am not sure one poetry site is going to be enough for you. I do not think there is any holding you back. I am wondering if you wrote all of these poems in one week or two days? You are a natural.
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