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Driver of Victory

The term driver of victory came to me unbidden, unexplored I tossed it around in my dendrite chambers My muse caught it and ran with it She is amusing, but she has great ideas too She decided Victory was a race car, We daringly painted her in our favorite colors. Hot pink, canary yellow, and outrageous orange. Victory was beautiful, gloriously bright. She showed up all of the other race cars They were dull in their silly primary colors With wraps from well-known sponsors We stood beside Victory in our silky race car jackets painted in hot pink, canary yellow and outrageous orange. The other cars cried, they were so intimidated. Let the race begin! Written 6-04-2019 Contest: Driver of Victory Verse Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 7/2/2019 5:09:00 PM
Well painted, Caren. Lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/2/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Line. I appreciate it.
Date: 6/26/2019 11:26:00 PM
Back with applause for your placement, Caren, I liked it from the start and enjoyed reading it again.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/27/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thank you so much. I appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 6/26/2019 11:16:00 AM
A short winner's list - and I'm pleased to find out you are on it, Caren. Such an interesting composition, and so colourful! Well done for your placement in my contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/26/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Julia. I barely had any comments on this, and I thought "I like it". Thank you so much!
Date: 6/12/2019 11:28:00 PM
Don't you just love those dendrite chambers where ideas pop around like popcorn. Excellent write, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/13/2019 12:17:00 AM
I count on them daily, Reason, I really do!

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