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Driven By the Shadows of Daydream

Driven by the shadows of daydream, Never lust after what you'd never have; Enticed by the brightness of its gleam, Do not expect more than you deserve. If anyone in the illusions of his mind Is obsessed by the tricks of fantasies, No sooner would such come to find That they're fairy tales and ecstasies. And so it is: there is more to this life Than would meet the ordinary eyes; Full of vanity, and sufficient with strife, Are all of deceit and devastating lies. Daydream is nothing but a cold comfort That only an awakening to reality can abort.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/15/2014 5:33:00 PM
A truly beautiful offering. So much truth ,so much wisdom. Bravo!
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Folajin Ademola
Date: 3/19/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks, Robert.
Date: 5/8/2014 11:18:00 AM
Enjoyed good.
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Date: 3/19/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks, Muhammad.
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Folajin Ademola
Date: 5/15/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 5/8/2014 8:01:00 AM
Fantastic, there are so many wonderful lines here, and your rhyme and structure. What a pleasure to read.
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:53:00 AM
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:13:00 PM
Folajin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Folajin Ademola
Date: 3/19/2016 10:09:00 PM
Thanks, Skat A.
Date: 4/24/2014 3:31:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Folajin:) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Folajin Ademola
Date: 3/19/2016 10:09:00 PM
Thanks , Anne.
Date: 4/22/2014 6:58:00 PM
Folajin, great poem, and points to express.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Folajin Ademola
Date: 5/1/2014 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Linda, Iooking forward to more of you too.

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