Drivel

we balanced along 
The embankments edge,
And past the Dead Dog Tree.
The view from the eyes that 
Flew above aerials hum
Left us down in the gravelled
Crawl. Scratch and tap among 
The ash heaps and the concrete
Cracks. Left to lie in the
Heart of the seldom sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 29, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Not drivel at all....Love your imagery, and imagination...
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