William Kelii Kekaula Poet Concrete

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Poetic Form: Concrete
Inspired: 2024 January 01
Image: N/A

Drive Safe

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  [--____________--]        \    (      \|/    )                (    )            -- --O-- --                                                                                                                    
             |    |                  (   \)    |  \|  \/( /     )            \)   )            / | \           
             |    |                         ()   |/  | /)     ( )         (     |     )       .   :   .  
             |    |                           \|  \/   )    (  |  )   (      \     )        .    :       .
     ~~~D R I N K *&* D R I V E~~~/\     (   |    )    (                )
   D          I'm the poster child         D  \   ( \ |//)          \)  |)                    __
  O          I am 15 and I know        O     \  (   |/)        (     |   /                  |O
 N          how to drive, BEST:        N        \   \|               |                        |P
 '          P L E AS E!  W A I T        '            \ ________________________|E
T         someone wanted to        T              \ |                                         |N
~       live. I will return for        ~                \                                         |__
)       you cheers 2 0 2 4.         T                   \
' T  ~DRINK  &  DRIVE~   DON '                     \
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Hiya Sharma January 3, 2024 at 8:10 PM Woah, this is a very creative poem.. I like the layout and the message you've conveyed, so amazingly here! Enjoyed reading this, may we get to see more of your artistic creativity in this new year, your poetry is very intriguing~ William Kelii Kekaula January 3, 2024 at 9:08 PM Giddiness near recoups end, Hiya, faults Concretes rise. An intricate exam of the keyboard tabs is needed. Spreads, joins, and repetition, should prompt an insight into possibilities, my friend. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit January 1, 2024 at 5:53 AM Very creative, my friend. I hear your message. A potent theme well delivered, William. William Kelii Kekaula January 1, 2024 at 6:51 AM Much appreciated, Vijay. Hope your day is fulfilling, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One January 1, 2024 at 4:52 AM This is very creative and great message! Silent One January 1, 2024 at 6:09 AM well he does love his shapes.. William Kelii Kekaula January 1, 2024 at 5:05 AM Happily, my first of the New Year, Silent One, tho' I believe, Brian Strand, was the first to have privy his way here as I entered his contest and a succession was afoot, 'poem was read' and there was only one viewer, hmm--'twas swift, of course, he's unable to comment being the sponsor--thank you for maintaining my faith in you, my friend. Aloha, William