Drive-In

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Don't feel sorry for me..He will probably take me out to a sit down restaurant for Valentine's Day if we have the money..He has been sick and it takes a bundle to pay ambulance rides, hospital bills, and lab test..A Drive-In will be okay if we don't have the money or a meal at home if we don't have the money for the Drive-In..

There'll be no Valentine treats Fancy chocolate to see No roses in a clear vase Just a meal on wheels Written: January 17, 2017 Entered into Francine's contest 7,7,7,5 syllables..

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/29/2017 3:16:00 PM

Its write on the money here Sara, good piece indeed.' I added some notes to my fiscal fiasco poem if you get time to visit here's wishing you the best.'

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2017 6:28:00 PM

Joe, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..I will check out your work..Sara

Pintu Mahakul

Date: 1/21/2017 3:40:00 PM

Just a meal on wheels This poem is very amazing poem that scribbles mind. ..7

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/21/2017 10:30:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by..I appreciate the time spent here..The meal on wheels that I am refering to is a place like Sonic Drive-In or another place we have here called Piggie Park that serves bar-be-que pork mostly but has excellent scrambled hamburgers..Or at my age it could be meals served by the senior citizen center and is called meals on wheels..Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/17/2017 11:30:00 AM

It happens of the best of families. Good luck!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2017 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting..Sara