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Dripping Emotions End

Dripping emotions end When dripping emotions end up in stare, all churned up humour, fuming breaths of flair, Subtle shreds of heart foresee no mend, a waning smile these tender pieces pretend, Shuddered by endless tides of strife, evanesced the faintest melody of my life, Plethora of thoughts and broken threads, rests tranquil the soul, at deepest beds, Expressions of ache, in vivid colours carved, no twinkle in eyes, my looks are scarred. Written Sept 15th, 2016 For contest "All the little pieces" Sponsor- Broken wings Entered for "Contest 203 any form max 14 lines" by Brian Strand

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Date: 9/18/2016 2:44:00 PM
Love this deep and emotional reflection on life, love and living! Such that I am adding this to my fav poems list.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/1/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Robert! Trust u r keeping well !
Date: 9/15/2016 2:36:00 PM
What a deep piece, Dr Upma. I enjoyed your choice of vocabulary as well. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/1/2016 10:47:00 PM
Thanks for your very wonderful words my sweet Eileen!

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