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'Tis a heavenly honeybee with a honeyed tongue drippin' dulcet words accompany by the rhythm of her buzzin' song. ...Sweet appetible verses flavourin' my soul with the nectar fetch from tasty seasons of Springs; Mmm! a bunch of saccharine syrup to behold. Aliment from the supernal honeycomb she ev'r brings. O' lofty queenbee! a noble subject clings to your pleasurable condiment, and to the chorus of your iridescent wings swarming with merriment. So, hail to Moonbee with a vow of Jubilee. A dedication to MoonBee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 11/4/2009 10:09:00 AM
Sweet poem! Thanks for your comments! take care-
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:26:00 AM
Ismael, This will touch Moonbee's heart and make her spirit sing. A lovely dedication. Thanks for your welcome comment and for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/2/2009 9:30:00 AM
omg! this is awesome! A drippin' with honey for sure! :) A wonderful dedication my friend and thank you for stopping by with your kind comment and reading time also. :)
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Date: 11/1/2009 4:29:00 PM
Superbly written and what a joy to receive as I am sure MoonBee did.. exciting wording and imaginative theme... I, myself, am not too fond of bees and we have lots in New Jersey ... but with your poem I may just try to befriend them... thankxxx for sharing about the loss of my son, Christopher.. but he is now waiting for all of us to be a family again... inspiration is overwheliming sometimes ... Linda-Marie
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Date: 11/1/2009 7:47:00 AM
A wonderful dedication to a fabulous Souper! Moonbee seems overwhelmed in her comments. You gave her style justice in your delightful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2009 6:45:00 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Ismael. Moonbee will love this one.Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2009 10:05:00 PM
Love this dedication, Ismael! Wonderfully expressed amiration! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/31/2009 2:09:00 PM
Oh, Ismael !!! This was so unexpected from you... Simply Wonderful ! .... (My Sis, was passing by and I called her to read it ... She says, My Head is already too big for the doorway and that just topped it - L O L !) Oh, Sweetness, Absolutely from the bottom of my Blossoming Heart ... Thank You ! - Shoot - I Think I'll Head Out Tonight on That, You Silver-Tongued Shakespeare, You... Thanks Kiddo... Luv You Too ... MoonBee
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Date: 10/31/2009 1:06:00 PM
wonderful tribute=Charma
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Date: 10/31/2009 12:22:00 PM
Great tribute to a Moonbee. Keep writing. Sara
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