Premiere Contest WinnerDrip-Dry

feeling exposed as mud splatters,
the cotton clinging and drenched
chattering teeth, seething relief
as the sun warms the rancid smile
of bulbous peaches pressing,
depressing and like an eclipse,
a disturbing shadow of unwomanliness.
all at once passionate, lusting, learned,
yes educated by tongue-filled eyes
and lies of squeezing love. tears drip-dry
for the milkmaid and the sodden sisterhood.
the fun begins, a roundup, but who wins...

i stand at a safe distance, heart on full alert,
stirring cheers and deathly gaps of shadowplay,
snipped cutouts of the soul hung on hangman lines.
a story waiting to be told on bar stools. another man
leans in looking at her wretched chest rise and fall,
fully ready to expose the secrets, pinning them
to the ground. and the sun goes up and down.

9/19/2018
First Place Premiere Winner
Mid-September 2018 Contest (Brian Strand)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pan Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:03 PM
congratulations indeed!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Thank you, Xuefeng!
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Brilliant Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
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September 21, 2018 at 1:53 AM
Great write Kim, congratulations. Tom
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September 21, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your wonderful win
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Gauthier Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Congrats on gold medal win, Kim. Well penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Line!
Kiser Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Wow, well done! Congrats on your win; this poem deserved the win.
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September 20, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
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September 19, 2018 at 5:29 AM
Impressive and captivating free verse dearest, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Demetrios!
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