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Drinking Wisdom

I went to the wilderness By following her voice I drank from her wisdom A cup chosen by choice Preconception abandoned I went with a clean mind Predudices, experiences Often make me blind Love the replacement In a World wracked with pain Hate is often chosen Over and over again A few make a difference Love spreads flavor like salt If some of us begin helping It won't matter who's at fault

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Kimmy Thieleke

Date: 1/12/2013 6:07:00 PM

Oh wow. I have to say I am loving this site. I appreciate genuine feelings and graceful thoughts.. thank you sir. nice to meet you

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2013 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Kimmy, nice to make your Aquaintance.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/10/2013 7:15:00 AM

Well stated Richard! I like the idea of drinking in wisdom. Wisdom and Knowledge in action is needed to combat the ills that ail the world. The idea of collective responsibility resonates well with wanting to heal the world. Nice job!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2013 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Vicky, coming from a young woman I see as wise I feel honored by your words.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/9/2013 8:56:00 PM

so much wisdom in such wisdom.If our only words are hurtful silence is golden.

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/8/2013 4:07:00 PM

Wisdom of ages packed here. Loved it. Thanks for sharing .... Mehnaz

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Mehnaz

Constance La France

Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 AM

Rick, this is a wonderful poem, profound and full of wisdom, if each person just tried the world would be a much better place, well done, Constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Contstance. How are you theses days?

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/8/2013 8:58:00 AM

"Love spreads flavor like salt", loved this verse, salt is the key of taste, without salt all food end in plain, as same as life without love ~> plain :D