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Drinking Footles For Fun

He’s here
Cold beer

Ten beers
Droop fears…

Effects .....
No sex

In bed
Sore head

Just tea
For me

Wee time
Divine

Jan Allison
18th August 2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/19/2014 8:56:00 AM

Amazing n witty Jan ! Seems u r having real fun!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 8:58:00 AM

just done some baby ones now LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2014 7:12:00 AM

Creative way to go with this work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Yes, alcohol can be an enemy that leads one into trouble..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 7:13:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Sara - am having fun with these short poems - just posted some more! Hugs jan xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/19/2014 2:17:00 AM

LOL These are so clever. (And it's true that alcohol impairs a man's ability to enjoy sex. Aren't you glad it doesn't affect women that way?) Had a great laugh reading these and wish you success in the footle contest. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:07:00 AM

... I wouldn't know Carolyn I am almost tee total sadly alcohol makes you lose your inhibitions so I guess you may end up doing something you later regret:-( Hugs jan xxx

Richard Nnoli

Date: 8/18/2014 4:50:00 PM

Short words with lots of sence, nice one Richard love this write somuch

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 4:54:00 PM

they are such fun to write Richard - have written 3 lots tonight! Hugs jan xxx Give it a go!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2014 4:27:00 PM

the last one is not perfect rhyme. but who cares? it is close enough. these are really cool, Jan. Let me go see fornication now. ahhaha

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 4:54:00 PM

have altered the last one now Andrea - its a little better

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 4:29:00 PM

Noooo its for the contest! Hugs jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 12:26:00 PM

HAHAHAHA bravo!!! I love it! You're wit..That's it!!! well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 12:30:00 PM

LOL Casarah think I'm stopping for the day posted 6 poems - am busy with mum and the memory clinic tomorrow - hope i don't forget to go to the appointment:-( Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/18/2014 12:25:00 PM

LOL! Jan, this is hilarious! Very cute. Jim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Jim _ i have had such fun writing 3 lots of these poems today - guess they just appeal to my warped sense of humour lol Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 11:43:00 AM

Love them Jan........mixed drink......don't think......hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 11:45:00 AM

I want more days like this Tim I am feeling sooooo good but being a little norty LOL - posted 6 poems and having a real giggle - thank you my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/18/2014 11:06:00 AM

Who He?...... Dat be?...... KQQL

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 11:09:00 AM

Oh Judy I am hooked and can't stop writing these little rhymes - the third lot I've posted today - thank you so much for bringing them to my attention - I'm addicted to writing them now! Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/18/2014 11:02:00 AM

These are absolute beauties - I love them! Heheheheh! Way to go, Jan! You got the "spirits" - lol. Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 11:03:00 AM

LOL Pandita It's the third lot I've posted today but I'm sticking with my originals for the contest these new ones are simply for fun:-) Hugs jan xxx