Drinker's Mother

I found poison sweeter Than to be called Drinker's Mother It was second time You came home Caprenetoid and open buttons When you came home like this at first time I haven't slept that night I was thinking and thinking Where my nurture not went right? I think you have forgotten those painful and hurtful night Yeah, you have forgotten Your mother's all pain and tear because of your father's bear I have heard those torturous words "look, Drinker's wife walking there on the road " I fathomed myself - "If I am Drinker's wife It's not my bloomer " But, if I am Drinker's Mother Ovio I am the offender Now, I have no more power to tolerate dual agony's shower I am committing suicide without espying your wife Don't repeat my hellish life with that girl It's my last wish Say NO, NO To Alcohol
27 December, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/14/2018 5:55:00 AM
vividly narrated!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/16/2018 4:28:00 AM
welcome!
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/14/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 2/16/2018 9:48:00 AM
You are a poet, I have enjoyed stopping by today.
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 8/23/2020 7:15:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 2/10/2018 10:18:00 PM
A powerful and emotional poem Sakshi. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/10/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/8/2018 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sakshi! Great poem and enjoyed reading . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/8/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a chummy coment!
Date: 2/5/2018 10:28:00 PM
A powerful message well illustrated. Congrats on a winning poem, Sakshi.
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/6/2018 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/5/2018 5:32:00 PM
This is a powerful poem, you have wrote this well.. but why is the date 27 December 2017, but it says it was posted in 2018?
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 2/6/2018 3:04:00 AM
Thank you so much! Actually I have written this poem in my diary on 27 December 2017 but I posted it in 2018.
Date: 1/25/2018 7:48:00 AM
A powerful message...involving a very serious condition, and cause of many tears...Say no to Alcohol
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Sakshi Singh
Date: 1/25/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for such a motivational compliment.
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