Drink Up the Silence

The echo of a thought lodged inside me, 
a disjointed welter of crushed feelings 
tinged with a sadness that finds no escape, 
haunts my sleep and takes on a dark shape.

My past joys now a vast black solitude, 
life turns into a blank wall, a canvass 
waiting for me to paint happy faces, 
memorializing moments love graces.

Silence perches on my shoulders, whispers 
and invites me to murmur against fate, 
drink up in wine and sing in broken chords 
of hateful things imparted in non-words.

I carry a dismal sort of longing 
to shift the weights of loss twisting my heart, 
make whole the broken slices of my dreams - 
pain speeds through my body like lightning streams.

So I lay watching the shadows of night, 
eerie silhouettes roaming around me, 
shrouding me as they hobble in the cold - 
my mind rambles aimless as I grow old.

@jjote 03222021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/5/2021 5:11:00 AM
Emotive write, Josefina. Ruminating in silence can be reflective and helpful. Feelings expertly communicated in splendid rhymes.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 4/8/2021 10:35:00 PM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 3/23/2021 6:36:00 AM
Enjoyed your write... thought provoking and thoughtful.. Love always.. God bless you too, Love, Gina
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/23/2021 9:04:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading. jjote
Date: 3/22/2021 8:45:00 PM
emotion preceded by thought preceded by desire, rooted in attachment to fleeting forms and objects ... release into the void, allowing our emptiness to be filled with divine love and light, whose individuated aspect we too are, thus enlivening the silence with unending vibrant bliss
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/23/2021 9:05:00 AM
That's a fascinating thought. Appreciate
Date: 3/22/2021 3:11:00 PM
Creative work that is emotive and expressive. I enjoyed reading this one today. We all have those feelings from time to time ..It is good to put in down on paper in poetic form because it helps us to heal. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/23/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Sara for dropping by. ..jjote
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