Drink of the Gardens

I listen to the sound of the rain 
I feel its touch all around
Thunder is the gods making love 
A storm of power a beauty of dynamism
Its liquid diamonds that drop from above
The atmosphere is raw as the rain pours

Its nature at its finest the drink of the gardens
The seeds are fed the roses now bloom 
The trees stand glistening
The grass sparkles with the dewiness
The ground moist underneath your naked feet
Its a sea of greenest waves 

The smell to your senses 
Its freshness wants you to admire
A perfume that persits to your being
A beautiful ray of gods essences
Priceless potion of natural substance
Almost drives your thirst

I listen to the sound of the rain 
I feel its touch all around
Its nature at its finest the drink of the gardens
The seeds are fed the roses now bloom
The smell to your senses 
Its freshness wants you to admire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/15/2010 5:36:00 AM
Wonderful write my darlng from UK, nice talking on facebook the other day...always Michael
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:11:00 AM
Great write...I enjoyed the rain that God blessed us with yesterday...There was thunder, lightin, and lots of rain..We haven't had much in a month or more..It was really needed and here I am reading such a beautiful poem about the topic..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2010 8:20:00 PM
Nature, especially flowers, are a wonderful source of inspiration and your poem is beautifully written, Sarah. Wishing you well, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2010 1:23:00 PM
Smile ~ "Extremely Beautiful Dear Precious & Gifted Sarah Hales; Filled With Dream Like Images Amid The Beauties of Creations Gifts of Light & Love; 'Enchantingly Majestical!!!'" ~ Smile, "Thank You" for stopping by and, it was good to see "Your Brightness" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always & Forever," John! ~ Smile, "Have the Most Magical & Beautiful of Days, Dear Sarah;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:52:00 AM
enjoyed this one as well my lady. keep up the good work.
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:31:00 AM
Nothing bests walking in the rain Sarah, you have captured natures champagne so lovely in this fine verse >> James
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Date: 8/13/2010 5:19:00 PM
SARAH, THE SOUNDS R A PLEASURE IN LIFE THE BEAUTY IS AWESOME* LUV~ SKAT
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:51:00 PM
descriptive of what most overlook in the madness of the everyday chase...such simple beauty in all it's wonders,which has been an inspiration to artists of all venues...peace , jay
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