Drink Drank Drunk

If drinking they’d rarely abuse
They might get away with a snooze
But choosing to binge
Makes them ill and they cringe
Confused at the end of the cruise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 11:20 AM
This is the perfect description of my brother. . .hahha Loved it. Thanks for your meaningful comments. I really appreciate that. I'mically a dark poet(though I do enjoy writing about nature or making humor poems from time to time), but I try to be as bright as I can outwardly. ;) Thanks for shining a light on me. Always, Laura
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Another fine Limerick my friend Duke and so happy to see u here at the Soup right before holiday time.. wishing u and yours the happiest Christmas and New Year.. full of happy and funny Limericks too.. with luv..
Graham Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Criminally overlooked. Bravo sir.
Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Nice humorous and witty write on drink drank and drunk- all the three states, Duke
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 4:17 PM
Hey, this is a good one!
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