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Drink Drank Drunk

If drinking they’d rarely abuse They might get away with a snooze But choosing to binge Makes them ill and they cringe Confused at the end of the cruise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/21/2012 11:20:00 AM
This is the perfect description of my brother. . .hahha Loved it. Thanks for your meaningful comments. I really appreciate that. I'mically a dark poet(though I do enjoy writing about nature or making humor poems from time to time), but I try to be as bright as I can outwardly. ;) Thanks for shining a light on me. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:32:00 PM
Another fine Limerick my friend Duke and so happy to see u here at the Soup right before holiday time.. wishing u and yours the happiest Christmas and New Year.. full of happy and funny Limericks too.. with luv..
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Date: 12/19/2010 7:46:00 AM
Criminally overlooked. Bravo sir.
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:13:00 AM
Nice humorous and witty write on drink drank and drunk- all the three states, Duke
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:17:00 PM
Hey, this is a good one!
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