Drifts

The wind blows them high Sun light smiles at perfection In their direction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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March 28, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Few words with such strong meaning A.S….love it! Debx
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March 28, 2023 at 4:52 AM
<3 just appreciating what's right in front of me :) warmly A.S.
Hind Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Hey, this is beautiful and amazing! Loved this haiku.
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March 6, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Funny what a cup of coffee and a cold winter morning in Minnesota can bring out of you ;) I'm happy that you enjoyed it! A.S.
Dutta Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Nice haiku. I enjoyed. Blessings
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March 5, 2023 at 5:59 AM
:) Anisha, Thank you! I have been reading your work as of late and find it very Soul warming. Thank you very much for the visit! Warmly A.S.
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March 2, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Well-crafted haiku, AS. You conveyed a clear image of a blowing wind and a smiling sun. Good job
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March 2, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Thank you very much Sotto! Really good teachers develop really good students. Your wisdom is always appreciated. Regards A.S.
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