Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Drifting In Dreams

If I close my eyes and look inside..
Sometimes I could feel your breath
as my feet can't step..
The touch of your hand placed on mine..
Your lips on my neck all lost in time..
My eyes now open, for the feeling has 
passed..
A time I can't shake even though it won't
last..
Till I dream again and our souls touch once
more..
We will live and be happy and still know there's
a door...

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Tara Jennings February 23, 2011 at 2:47 PM When we love and lose that one person, that love keeps them alive inside us. I still feel my Mothers cheek on mine, but now its comforting. thankyou

Rhia Madison Thomer January 8, 2011 at 9:39 PM magnificent emotion in this piece, this is going into my favorites i liked it so! i loved the opening line especially. well written work here. --Madison

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 4, 2011 at 4:25 PM Exceptional.. and only those deeply in luv can really understand the precious lines u have written.. I do ..luv.. so wonderful your imagery of romance and passion ... forever and always your Jersey Girl..with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire January 3, 2011 at 9:27 AM Having someone you love by your side can bring you the best dreams, born from a feeling of contentment and happiness. You have such a romantic quality to your work and I'm a big fan. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick January 3, 2011 at 7:17 AM Very expressive and emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Touching of souls is great..Thanks for stopping by my work for your presence was a blessing this morn..Sara

John Loving Iii January 3, 2011 at 6:47 AM so funny you should post this. i just posted something similar. John H Loving III

Wilma Neels January 3, 2011 at 6:41 AM Dreams can be the most amazing thing ever.. Beautiful piece Mr. F is great to drift isn't it? Once again a joy.. With love Wilma

Daniel Cheeseman January 3, 2011 at 6:13 AM Loved the content in this fine write Michael, happy new year friend and thanks