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Drifting Hearts

Hold me.
My heart's adrift.
Now hard aground, torn sails. 
Can we just once sail WITH the tide?
Again?

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Joseph P. DiMino

March 1, 2022 at 8:10 PM

For sure; sometimes it is best just to hold onto one another, do a reset. Nothing more important than each other, our relationships. The rest can wait. Well, said.

Ken Rone

September 12, 2023 at 1:48 PM

Amen

Joseph P. DiMino

February 22, 2022 at 3:56 AM

Oh would worn hearts re-float so easily! -- I hear ya! Well said.

Ken Rone

February 22, 2022 at 8:45 AM

Thanks Joe. I took up a new form here and was challenged by creating a scenario and message in 21 syllables. I appreciate your read.

Andrew Fairchild

February 4, 2022 at 10:59 PM

"It's run aground, torn sails" How often I have felt like that! This is WONDERFUL! God Bless You!

Ken Rone

February 22, 2022 at 8:47 AM

Great to have your comment Andrew. Sailing, rail down with the tide in a sunny day, well...there is nothing like it. Wishing all our days were so carefree.