Drifting Hearts

Hold me. My heart's adrift. Now hard aground, torn sails. Can we just once sail WITH the tide? Again?

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Joe Dimino

Date: 3/1/2022 8:10:00 PM

For sure; sometimes it is best just to hold onto one another, do a reset. Nothing more important than each other, our relationships. The rest can wait. Well, said.

Ken Rone
Date: 9/12/2023 1:48:00 PM

Amen

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/22/2022 3:56:00 AM

Oh would worn hearts re-float so easily! -- I hear ya! Well said.

Ken Rone
Date: 2/22/2022 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Joe. I took up a new form here and was challenged by creating a scenario and message in 21 syllables. I appreciate your read.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/4/2022 10:59:00 PM

"It's run aground, torn sails" How often I have felt like that! This is WONDERFUL! God Bless You!

Ken Rone
Date: 2/22/2022 8:47:00 AM

Great to have your comment Andrew. Sailing, rail down with the tide in a sunny day, well...there is nothing like it. Wishing all our days were so carefree.

Marco Chies

Date: 2/1/2022 7:13:00 PM

a quick and masterful poem... poetry is in your veins, ken!

Ken Rone
Date: 2/2/2022 8:30:00 AM

Wow, such an over-the-top compliment humbles me to the core. My most sincere thank you my friens. - Ken