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Drifting

My fingers glide through autumn’s hues -
green and crimson glisten among
ripples of gold and persimmon.
My hand caresses cool crystal.

Still are fall’s bright trees along the river.
They fill my eyes as dreamily I drift.

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2017

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Charlie Smith Date: 4/7/2017 11:00:00 AM Dreamy, congratulations Andrea... Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 4/7/2017 8:10:00 AM Congrats Andrea, for your well-deserved third placement with this divine piece!! ;-) Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/6/2017 3:49:00 PM So soothing and beautiful Andrea! Lovely and beautiful imagery. Thank you and congrats.. Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/6/2017 8:56:00 AM Congrats on your win, Andrea. I missed this when you first posted it - love it. Fall is my favorite season. Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 4/5/2017 9:22:00 PM Nice, Andrea! Opposite end of the seasons for us Northern Hemispherers now.... : ) Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 4/5/2017 8:35:00 PM Lovely scenery Congrats, Andrea! Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 3/15/2017 7:17:00 PM ..such a tranquil scene... autumn in all its glorious splendor :-) beautiful writing, a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 3/15/2017 4:07:00 PM Hello Andrea. Contest or no contest this entry can stand on its own. Autumn is my favorite seasons for all obvious reasons of color and flair and yes the clean cool air. You have captured her essence wonderfully and beautifully. Best of luck with the contest. Well done Login to Reply

Becca Teagan Date: 3/8/2017 8:24:00 PM wow... ! This is so nice... Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 3/8/2017 11:06:00 AM Pretty - I'm sipping wine, at piece on a mountain meadow. This is my sensation from your work. Love, daver Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 3/6/2017 12:41:00 PM You paint a serene taste of peaceful escape. Sensations quelled in the landscape. A touch of spring with cool delight. As season's die towards winters night. Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/5/2017 8:14:00 PM I think this is 'river loverly', I truly do. Beautiful imagery and feel. Mine's a bit off the wall this time. Good luck in all things and hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 3/5/2017 11:40:00 AM Please take me there Andrea. I'd love to experience your beautiful journey. Login to Reply

Jennifer Walker Date: 3/5/2017 7:46:00 AM Tranquility of Fall with your imagery. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/4/2017 6:22:00 PM A beautiful, peaceful poem and the picture is perfect, Andrea.i especially love the last line. Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 3/3/2017 10:07:00 AM A perfect poem for the contest, a very peaceful feel while reading..good luck Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/3/2017 2:53:00 AM - A glowing and beautiful picture in your lines, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 3/3/2017 12:49:00 AM Beautiful... it exactly tells me why I love the fall so much more than I love autumn. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 3/2/2017 10:07:00 PM Lovely imagery and setting here in your poem, Andrea! I enjoyed it, good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/2/2017 9:11:00 PM Simply beautiful...makes me want just lie on the shore and bask in the beauty Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/2/2017 8:45:00 PM Love the fall colors...Nicely penned Andrea Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/2/2017 8:35:00 PM I love the fall, for exactly the reasons your poem so well expresses!! :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/2/2017 7:50:00 PM Love those lovely trees along the river! Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 3/2/2017 7:43:00 PM Wonderful! Poem & photo :) A7 dear poetess. Login to Reply