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Drifting

My fingers glide through autumn’s hues - green and crimson glisten among ripples of gold and persimmon. My hand caresses cool crystal. Still are fall’s bright trees along the river. They fill my eyes as dreamily I drift.
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Smith Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 11:00 AM
Dreamy, congratulations Andrea...
Kimathi Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your well-deserved third placement with this divine piece!! ;-)
Scars Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 3:49 PM
So soothing and beautiful Andrea! Lovely and beautiful imagery. Thank you and congrats..
Krampe Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I missed this when you first posted it - love it. Fall is my favorite season.
Vinson Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Nice, Andrea! Opposite end of the seasons for us Northern Hemispherers now.... : )
Singh Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Lovely scenery Congrats, Andrea!
Marie Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 7:17 PM
..such a tranquil scene... autumn in all its glorious splendor :-) beautiful writing, a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
Ricci Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Hello Andrea. Contest or no contest this entry can stand on its own. Autumn is my favorite seasons for all obvious reasons of color and flair and yes the clean cool air. You have captured her essence wonderfully and beautifully. Best of luck with the contest. Well done
Teagan Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:24 PM
wow... ! This is so nice...
Austin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Pretty - I'm sipping wine, at piece on a mountain meadow. This is my sensation from your work. Love, daver
Johnson Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 12:41 PM
You paint a serene taste of peaceful escape. Sensations quelled in the landscape. A touch of spring with cool delight. As season's die towards winters night.
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:14 PM
I think this is 'river loverly', I truly do. Beautiful imagery and feel. Mine's a bit off the wall this time. Good luck in all things and hugs ... CayCay
Inman Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Please take me there Andrea. I'd love to experience your beautiful journey.
Walker Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Tranquility of Fall with your imagery.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 6:22 PM
A beautiful, peaceful poem and the picture is perfect, Andrea.i especially love the last line.
Parker Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 10:07 AM
A perfect poem for the contest, a very peaceful feel while reading..good luck
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:53 AM
- A glowing and beautiful picture in your lines, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 12:49 AM
Beautiful... it exactly tells me why I love the fall so much more than I love autumn.
Leiser Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Lovely imagery and setting here in your poem, Andrea! I enjoyed it, good luck in the contest :)
Smith Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Simply beautiful...makes me want just lie on the shore and bask in the beauty
May Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Love the fall colors...Nicely penned Andrea
Vaso Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 8:35 PM
I love the fall, for exactly the reasons your poem so well expresses!! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:50 PM
Love those lovely trees along the river!
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Wonderful! Poem & photo :) A7 dear poetess.
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