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Drifting

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My fingers glide through autumn’s hues - green and crimson glisten among ripples of gold and persimmon. My hand caresses cool crystal. Still are fall’s bright trees along the river. They fill my eyes as dreamily I drift.

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Charlie Smith

Date: 4/7/2017 11:00:00 AM

Dreamy, congratulations Andrea...

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/7/2017 8:10:00 AM

Congrats Andrea, for your well-deserved third placement with this divine piece!! ;-)

Lu Loo

Date: 4/6/2017 3:49:00 PM

So soothing and beautiful Andrea! Lovely and beautiful imagery. Thank you and congrats..

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/6/2017 8:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. I missed this when you first posted it - love it. Fall is my favorite season.

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/5/2017 9:22:00 PM

Nice, Andrea! Opposite end of the seasons for us Northern Hemispherers now.... : )

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/5/2017 8:35:00 PM

Lovely scenery Congrats, Andrea!

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/15/2017 7:17:00 PM

..such a tranquil scene... autumn in all its glorious splendor :-) beautiful writing, a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2017 4:07:00 PM

Hello Andrea. Contest or no contest this entry can stand on its own. Autumn is my favorite seasons for all obvious reasons of color and flair and yes the clean cool air. You have captured her essence wonderfully and beautifully. Best of luck with the contest. Well done

Becca Teagan

Date: 3/8/2017 8:24:00 PM

wow... ! This is so nice...

Daver Austin

Date: 3/8/2017 11:06:00 AM

Pretty - I'm sipping wine, at piece on a mountain meadow. This is my sensation from your work. Love, daver

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/6/2017 12:41:00 PM

You paint a serene taste of peaceful escape. Sensations quelled in the landscape. A touch of spring with cool delight. As season's die towards winters night.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/5/2017 8:14:00 PM

I think this is 'river loverly', I truly do. Beautiful imagery and feel. Mine's a bit off the wall this time. Good luck in all things and hugs ... CayCay