Phyllis Babcock Poet Light Verse

Drifting

The feel of the warm sun's ray
 as it wraps it's arms around
Greeting the day with endless delight
the heart felt light and airy
as it's spirit flew into the amber sun
It's  fire burns a flickering flame
As time lazily drifts away.

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Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2015 at 11:22 PM aha. I have reached the point where I left off!!! Feels good to have caught up with your marvelous poetry!!

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2015 at 11:16 PM GREAT imagery here. As time lazily drifts away. Love that line.

Arthur Vaso December 5, 2014 at 10:13 PM Wonderful, reminds me of summer vacations, a good thought to have now that winter is haunting us!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 10:34 AM - Oh... a lovely poem dear Phyllis! - Missing the summer sun when I read this :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong November 18, 2014 at 11:26 PM This poem makes me want to drift away while bathing under the Hawaiian sun. A lovely poem Phyllis!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 18, 2014 at 12:07 AM A great winter Phyllis when Sun hugs us as parents. Very sweet indeed!Love. Take careXXXXX rajat

Laura Leiser November 17, 2014 at 3:43 PM Enjoyed this poem. It feels light and day dreamy. Thanks for sharing!

David Meade November 17, 2014 at 2:00 PM I like yours better! The third line popped for me!! All the best!