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poem written based upon this image from Joyce Kolb (pinterest.com)

Drifting

the crescent moon cradles her  
     as though she were a secret  
          the sky has waited all evening to tell.  

clouds gather close,  
     puffed and pearled,  
          soft as breath against her cheeks.  

two hot-air balloons rise slowly,  
     their lantern-lit bellies glowing  
          like patient wishes ascending.

she follows their drifting,  
     steady as small promises,  
          moving with the quiet certainty  
               of things that already know  
                    where wonder first opens.
 
she dreams again~  
     not of anything rooted,  
          but of the hidden chambers  
               where night tucks away  
                    its tender, unspoken stories.

she imagines the moon ajar,  
     a doorway into silver-stitched realms  
          where clouds rise like steps,  
               and every drifting balloon  
                    carries a secret meant  
                         only for her hands to open.

she dreams the sky is listening,  
     waiting for her to whisper  
          the first question she’s ever dared  
               to ask out loud.  

she dreams of walking  
     across the moon’s bright curve,  
          barefoot and unafraid,  
               leaving small crescent footprints  
                    that shimmer behind her  
                         like a trail of soft astonishment.  

she dreams of becoming the kind of girl
      who can read the wind,  
          who can hear the hush inside a cloud’s slow turning,  
               who can follow a balloon all the way to its reason.  

as she drifts deeper into the night’s gentle blue,  
     the moon smiles wider~  
          because it knows 
               she is dreaming herself  
                    into someone braver  
                         than she was yesterday~  

someone who understands  
     that the sky is not above her but around her, 
           holding her,  
               carrying her,  
               teaching her how to rise.
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