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Drifting

I want to meet you where the waters rush to the sea where no barriers hold your smile from me let the wind take us drifting to paradise shores surrounded by waves we float to heaven`s door as our spirits dance then are no more.

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Anna M Shepard

Date: 9/17/2021 4:25:00 PM

The imagery is stupendous. I just loved this. Thank you so much for sharing this, with the rest of us.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/16/2021 11:02:00 PM

SUPERB AND LOVELY EXPRESSION

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2019 9:40:00 AM

this is truly lovely - great to see you posting again

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2019 1:04:00 PM

Have not been writing much but can honestly say it took me a long time to bounce back to myself. To have some energy and feel better. Glad it was a winter with no sickness or surgery. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/23/2019 4:57:00 PM

G'day Phyllis … there is something about the power of water and the mystery it holds. For lovers, as you wrote, there are no fences - catch you soon Phyllis - Lindsay

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/4/2019 5:00:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Lindsay. Wishing for some warm breezes and melting snow. So cold out this winter and such a long stretch. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2019 1:47:00 PM

- Sounds lovely, dear Phyllis - Beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/4/2019 4:58:00 PM

Thanks for the comment. Hope you are staying warm. Coldest Feb. for us in 83 years. So much for global warming. lol love phyl