Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

Drifting

I want to meet you
where the waters
rush to the sea
where no barriers hold
your smile from me
let the wind take us
drifting to paradise shores
surrounded by waves
we float to heaven`s door
as our spirits dance
 then  are no more.

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Anna M Shepard September 17, 2021 at 4:25 PM The imagery is stupendous. I just loved this. Thank you so much for sharing this, with the rest of us.

Mahtab Bangalee September 16, 2021 at 11:02 PM SUPERB AND LOVELY EXPRESSION

Jack Horne March 15, 2019 at 9:40 AM this is truly lovely - great to see you posting again Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2019 at 1:04 PM Have not been writing much but can honestly say it took me a long time to bounce back to myself. To have some energy and feel better. Glad it was a winter with no sickness or surgery. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie February 23, 2019 at 4:57 PM G'day Phyllis … there is something about the power of water and the mystery it holds. For lovers, as you wrote, there are no fences - catch you soon Phyllis - Lindsay Phyllis Babcock March 4, 2019 at 5:00 PM Thanks for your comment Lindsay. Wishing for some warm breezes and melting snow. So cold out this winter and such a long stretch. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2019 at 1:47 PM - Sounds lovely, dear Phyllis - Beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock March 4, 2019 at 4:58 PM Thanks for the comment. Hope you are staying warm. Coldest Feb. for us in 83 years. So much for global warming. lol love phyl