Drift In Lieu of Swim

Much like the ocean
She was raw and real
Not steady, quite deadly
Never calm or still

The waves were her words
Unpredictable as they crash
Both influenced by weather
Well equipped, bold and brash

Perhaps this explains
Her addiction to the coast
Submerged in wild waters
At peace, she would float

Submitting to the motion
Surrendering to the wind
Becoming one with the ocean
Drift in lieu of swim
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Fantastic ink! xomo :)
Michael Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Nice write... I enjoyed it...All the best Anna
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 11:23 AM
I'm drifting along with your words...great metaphor Anna
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