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Drift In Lieu of Swim

Much like the ocean She was raw and real Not steady, quite deadly Never calm or still The waves were her words Unpredictable as they crash Both influenced by weather Well equipped, bold and brash Perhaps this explains Her addiction to the coast Submerged in wild waters At peace, she would float Submitting to the motion Surrendering to the wind Becoming one with the ocean Drift in lieu of swim

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/24/2018 12:13:00 PM
Fantastic ink! xomo :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 1:17:00 PM
Nice write... I enjoyed it...All the best Anna
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Date: 6/8/2018 11:23:00 AM
I'm drifting along with your words...great metaphor Anna
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