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Dried Tears

dried tears I want to see the face of God look down and smile. his tears abated after they dried in Louisiana. the kindness brought a smile.

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Pipping Stars

Date: 9/1/2017 6:43:00 AM

cool ... glad we read this one ... just read one of your that say "gods" in it ... first feel we got was right ... your awesome ... thanks for the feels ...write on ...

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/31/2017 4:36:00 PM

Hi Patricia , Amen , great write ::))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/31/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Niall.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/31/2017 3:28:00 PM

A short poem with such significance, Patricia. Great Write!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/31/2017 4:48:00 PM

I like to think that when god or the he/she/it whatever created us has reason to smile about us sometimes. Thank youRalph.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/31/2017 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful piece Patricia :) xomo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/31/2017 8:52:00 AM

Amidst the good the bad and the beautiful I'm doing alright, thanks for asking :) you?

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/31/2017 8:04:00 AM

Hey Maureen how are you? Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2017 4:28:00 AM

I'm up early this morning as my husband had to have blood work done, he doesn't like that, and I'm here to comfort him. So he wants me to comment on his friends poetry this morning. he said, "I love this Patricia! It is short but very elaborate in what it was trying to say. A very good reference to Louisiana, awesome my friend. This poem brought me a smile, and I really enjoyed having it read to me this morning. What a stupendous piece, great work." I liked the reference to God, thanks, Emma :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/31/2017 7:48:00 AM

Good morning Emma and Russell. Just a little thought I had late last night. Thank you for commenting. Buck up Russell time is a great healer.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/31/2017 4:21:00 AM

Touching verses good for meditation. Beyond the clouds there is the sun. Tears and smiles - the rain of this summer. All is good from God. Pope Paul II and Max Scheler agreed and it is explained both love (Corintheni 13 , I think) and that God let us have troubles in order to activate our solidarity, mercy, deep simphaty, empathy, piety and good deeds. Best regards and wishes.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/31/2017 7:50:00 AM

welcome to my site Ovidiu. It is nice to meet young thank you for your comment.