Dressed To Impress- Girls Night Out Contest

T'was a lovely summer evening
To a fancy dress party we are to go
Dressed up in crepe paper
as rainbows i have you know

We cut and sewed and stuck
Ra-raa skirts with bodice tops
Hats akimbo with moon and stars
We thought we looked the tops

Was difficult to sit down
As it crinkled and stuck to skin
So we leant and stood up
Glass in hand much more within.

Then it happened
Someone lit a cigarette in the toilet
Smoke alarms went off with might
Plus the sprinkler system, what a sight

Six very wet and dripping girls
Crepe paper hanging low
Someone grabbed the cloth's off the tables
To hide our modesty but ohh

A lovely view was made by all of us
Hair hanging down make up askew
Not a lot of clothing was worn
Just panties on a few.

If ever you use crepe paper
To make a fancy dress
Make sure you wear adequate clothing
Unless you want to do more than impress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/9/2014 9:32:00 AM
Seren, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:23:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/4/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Roibert ....Seren
Date: 6/4/2014 12:41:00 AM
Interesting write, congrats on the win, seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/4/2014 6:37:00 AM
thanks Ram...Seren
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