Dressed for the occasion

Nervous for our wedding day
But as ready as I'll ever be
~ Did you remember the ring?



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025

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Sam Kauffman

November 11, 2025 at 11:42 AM

Utterly charming, Line. I love how it reflects the nervous energy and low level apprehension of a wedding day! Blessings.

Line Gauthier

November 11, 2025 at 12:50 PM

Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Sam ~

Jenish Somadas

November 11, 2025 at 5:03 AM

..so charming and sweet.. By the way, what is 'Wordku' Line?

Jenish Somadas

November 11, 2025 at 10:08 PM

Ok.. 5-7-5 words not syllables.. I got it.. I'll try one.. Thank you..

Line Gauthier

November 11, 2025 at 8:37 AM

Thanks, Jenish. Wordku is 3 lines of 5-7-5 words but the lines can't run into each other ~ they have to read like 3 separate sentences... there's always the unfortunate risk of making the brevity sound choppy.