Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Rhyme

Dreamy Visions-Collab With Jo

Limpid sprinting waters of burbling brooks
Rows of flamboyant and swishing dark green pines
Embellished with glowing verdure on sidelines
Tender and flushed buds aglow with rich looks

The dense clouds have descended on the earth
Little fluffy white wisps of dreamy visions
Natural splendour with divine collisions
What a splendid mountain view, beyond worth!

Craggy hillocks covered with the snow quark
"A thing of beauty is a joy forever!"
Hark back locale to recall for whomever
A lovely photograph of nature park!


Placed : 1st

Collab with Jo Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel 
Date: 01-05-2023
Syllable count: 10.11.11.10

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Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 6:32 AM A sweet pastoral write Patri. Great collaboration. Congratulations on your win! :) Patri Venkata Ramana May 4, 2023 at 1:33 AM Thank you so much for the best compliments.

Sam Kauffman May 2, 2023 at 9:56 AM Dynamic, flowing energy Patri! A seamless collaboration indeed! Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana May 4, 2023 at 1:32 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2023 at 1:20 AM That Keats' line clinched it for you, Patri, love how you incorporated it into your poem:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:) Patri Venkata Ramana May 4, 2023 at 1:32 AM Thank you so much for the compliments. My tributes to the great poet.