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Dreamy Love

I went swimming in the Notwane River, And took a plunge on the cool waters Resurfacing only to take a deep breath, And feel the cool air above Then, BOOM! I saw you! Your face, the radiance of mankind That killed my breathing, paralyzing my heart The beating of my heart, so faint As to be almost imperceptible Everything swam before my eyes! When I saw you, and saw love, And envisioned the joys of the world That we’d have together If we give love a chance to lead us Onto the day of our union…d

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2012 4:58:00 AM
Hi Victoria, lovely rythmatic poem, thanks for sharing x :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:57:00 AM
HI VICTORIA, LOVELY RYTHMATIC POEM THANKS FOR SHARING X
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:56:00 AM
HI VICTORIA, LOVELY RYTHMATIC POEM THANKS FOR SHARING X
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Date: 10/30/2012 4:54:00 AM
Hi Charles, lucky lady in question. Fab write thanks for sharing x :)
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