Newton Ranaweera Poet Verse

Dreamy Idyllic Impressions

Fly butterflies red and blue,
Being dazed by a rainbow  
That dawns on her fairy face,
Well adorned with golden hue.
This dame must dawn a festive 
Moment: a lovely wedding, 
Yet the sad tale her eyes tell
Crumbles my idyllic dream.

Visual # 3
Syllabic count: 7 syllables in each line

*A 3rd Place*in the following contest (judged on Oct. 25, 2020)

Oct. 19, 2020
Impressions Poetry Contest 
Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2020 at 7:48 AM - Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera November 6, 2020 at 4:03 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your constant encouragement!!

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2020 at 5:18 PM yes, I too felt as if her face crumbled with some kind of sadness. WEll done, Newton Newton Ranaweera October 22, 2020 at 5:44 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2020 at 11:47 AM - Touchingly beautiful, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 20, 2020 at 1:24 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this great encouragement!!