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Dreamy Idyllic Impressions

Fly butterflies red and blue, Being dazed by a rainbow That dawns on her fairy face, Well adorned with golden hue. This dame must dawn a festive Moment: a lovely wedding, Yet the sad tale her eyes tell Crumbles my idyllic dream. Visual # 3 Syllabic count: 7 syllables in each line *A 3rd Place*in the following contest (judged on Oct. 25, 2020) Oct. 19, 2020 Impressions Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud

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Date: 10/26/2020 7:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/6/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your constant encouragement!!
Date: 10/22/2020 5:18:00 PM
yes, I too felt as if her face crumbled with some kind of sadness. WEll done, Newton
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/20/2020 11:47:00 AM
- Touchingly beautiful, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this great encouragement!!

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