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Dreamtime: Secret Garden

alone.... in a vast meadow, silently counting ruby explosions of rare, lion's tooth orchids, hidden under tiny royal cloaks of elliptical emerald leaf canopies, so beautiful.... I'm briefly blinded

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/25/2017 10:17:00 AM
This is quite good-- evoking emotion efficiently like a true haiku.
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jimbo! Thanks for reading mine. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:44:00 PM
LOve the layout. It shoots each idea right into mind's eye. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a special piece to share with us all with luv this happy Sunday luv..
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:21:00 PM
the last line completes the jewel! Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:57:00 AM
beautiful words and form. its flows flawlessly.
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:32:00 AM
Magical, breathtaking, I love the forms you use to express and visualize, this flows so well! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:36:00 PM
Lovely - I recall the fields in British Columbia's Queen Charlotte Islands where the wild flowers grew in profusion..
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:50:00 PM
Wow! It does sound beautifully blinding. :)
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Date: 3/17/2009 6:30:00 PM
Dear Jim, This is the first of YOUR Dreamtime POEMS Vivid I walked with YOU through this POETIC Masterpiece ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/17/2009 3:30:00 PM
Now this has left me speechless. A taste of the unreal... Fantasy beckons.
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:26:00 AM
I am so sorry but I have more to say about this one. i went away from it an had to come back! Fantasy but what a beautiful dream... "Ruby Explosions" wow! I have to put you in my favorites. Have a magical day! Smiles again from Lolita (and btw thank you for all of your kind comments on my writing, I am honored to be read by someone with such talent)
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Date: 3/10/2009 6:22:00 AM
It sounds so beautiful and magical! "Tiny royal cloaks of elliptical emerald leaf canopies" wow love this line! I think I love reading all of this great poetry as much if not more than writing it. LOL Smiles from Lolita
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